Concise+writing

Week 14 activity:

Look at the following webpage and re-work it based on principles of effective web writing. You should be able to explain the choices and amendments that you made.

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Type your responses here.

- Click on 'Shopping Cart' - Enter Billing and Shipping information - Confirm order before checking out - After checking out, you have to contact the store if there are any problems.


 * Click on Shopping Cart Icon at top of page.
 * Confirm all orders.
 * Enter billing and shipping information.
 * Click Check Me Out button, and order is sent to the store.
 * Any problems before shipping are to be directed to us, and problems after, to the store.


 * Steps to checkout!**

After your selection of items, press the Shopping Cart icon on the very top of the page. Once in the shopping cart, you can do several things like you can confirm your orders, enter billing and shipping information, thereafter click the Check Me Out button. After that, we send your order to the individual store and the transaction is between you and the store. If there are any problems, you need to talk to the store. If you call us, we will only be able to help you with our part of the transaction.

1)Click on shopping cart icon 2)Enter the billing and shipping infomations 3)Click Check Me Out Button 4)For queries, approach individaul store.
 * Checking out**

Slimmed down with high definition Television revealed!
Timezone: GMT + 8hours Posted on: 10-Jan-2008 14:56hrs

High definition televisions are slimming down while their pictures and capabilities are beefing up. Innovations at the world's largest consumer electronics show in Las Vegas underscore the trend.

A 3-mm (.12-inch) thick Organic Light Emitting Diode (OLED) television hits the market in Japan in December and was launched in the US market this week at a price of 2,500 dollars (1,700 Euros). Jose Albanez of Sony mention that OLED television is the future of the TV and the costs will drop **eventually**.

Pioneer presented a **concept model** of 50-inch LCD high-definition television with just 9mm deep and announced that it will be ready for consuming within three years.